Do you think this sounds good, or should I re word it?

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I wanna scream" I Love You" from the top of my lungs,

But I'm afraid that someone else will hear me.

Maybe try and use that less?

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Dickheady or a Gross Generalisation; It's probably a lol.

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Ewwww.... Pay period.

Maybe try and use that less?

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Thats what its called, the 2 weeks that you get paid for is the "pay period".

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I wanna scream" I Love You" from the top of my lungs,

But I'm afraid that someone else will hear me.

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I'd suggest asking for a cut in hours per week rather than per pay period.  Unless you have some weird schedule where you work certain days/hours every other week.  The word week makes it sound a bit more easily organizable. Or you could ask to just work 3 or 4 days per week instead of dealing with larger number like people don't seem to like doing.

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I get every other weekend off, so i wasn't sure how to word it.

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I wanna scream" I Love You" from the top of my lungs,

But I'm afraid that someone else will hear me.

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Quote: from Birdo at 12:28 am on Nov. 20, 2008

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I'd suggest asking for a cut in hours per week rather than per pay period.  Unless you have some weird schedule where you work certain days/hours every other week.  The word week makes it sound a bit more easily organizable. Or you could ask to just work 3 or 4 days per week instead of dealing with larger number like people don't seem to like doing.

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I get every other weekend off, so i wasn't sure how to word it.

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